Hey,
its not some kind of poem that I usually read, it more like a long story..I could feel the emotion running throughout the whole poem. I can't really say something about the flow because its more a story then a poem but nevertheless I liked it. although I do hope that its just fiction..5.5
kisses stephanie

For the record, it's not fiction. I had problems writing it, and I had to do it in chunks because it was hard for me. If any of u weird people want details, ill share, but be wary i have mood swings.

Oh my god this is absolutly breath taking, i felt so much emotion in this i really started crying.

im so sorry if this is true :(

completly sad,
very good and i loved how you used just enough discriptive words,like you didnt over do it like most.

it was a great experience reading this,

thank you

Wow.

It looked a bit long when I first saw it but then it held my attention.

Very sad and emotional.

But I still liked it.

I'm sorry if this is real.

5/5 for sure.

Kelsey xx

Hey its the one you sent me. oh by the way my friend loved it although it was really sad.

If this is true then i am truely sorry for your loss and no one ever deserves to be hurt like that. It was long, but it was definetly worth reading because i think it shows that never take for granite that there will always be a tomorrow...