by Love vs Fate Mar 25, 2008
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
I'm sitting here tonight, |
by Jes Miller
Wow..i like it. It's true too. People fall in and out of faith..i kno i sometimes do, then again who doesn't. But i liked it. Sorry to hear about your grandma. I kno what its like to lose a family member that you're close with.... |
Its really kewl |
by Sammerz
Wow....im speechless once again you have me lost of my words on this poem words cant describe how good this is i loved it |
by Nicole
I love this poem it is nice to no that there is a guy who writes poems and is still really sweet. |
by michelle
I like it! I'm going to be a bit mean and say that I love the feeling and emotion but it needs to flow more. It doesn't have to rhyme but it needs rhythm like a song. Other than that I love it! keep it up! |