Intoxicated By You

by Silverflower   Mar 25, 2008


"I am intoxicated by you, my every breath i think of you, my every thought is about you, i think about you more then anybody else, cant you see? you know i like you and i know you like me, so why cant we go out? is it because of your friends, they think your to good for me? becuase if that is true, then you should be telling them that all you think of is me. Do you think it is my friends? that they think i am to good for you? well it's not, every one of my friends bug me to ask you out, but i dare not, cause what if you say no, even if you like me? is it because your ex is one of my friends? well she bugs me to ask you out too, so why cant you ask me out? I love you, I am intoxicated by you. Dont you notice, when we slow dance how i look you in your blue eyes? How i always smile when is see you? have you noticed i make detours to my class route to see you? people tell me that you smile when i enter the room, so why cant we just go out, i want to be more then "just friends" i have wanted to be then "just friends" since i first looked into your blue eyes. your hair so red, you stand out in a crowd. how we slow danced to all those songs? did you not feel a connection? cause i felt fireworks all around me, and when we danced, the only person i saw alive was you! I love you, and i am intoxicated by you."

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    Wow!! great words and flow!! a passionate feel of desire and reality!! well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Silverflower

    People please rate my poem and leave comments! i like to know how i did on my poem! :D