Wow. this is amazing. i love how you based it on a dream. i had a vivid of what you were talking about; you have talent. && congratulations on getting your poem published. :) niice work.

That is completely true... I agree with you.

This is would be perfect world if those things never exited

Well that dream was beautiful lets jus hope mayb in the future or in a few hundred years it'll come true
Love ya
5/5
Good Job!!!