I LIKE HOW YOU ENDED IT WITH THE TITLE.. =]

LOVE THE WORDS AHAHAH! I TUMBLING THROUGH CAUSE IF THE SLANG GURL BUT U GOT IT DOWN PACKED. I AGREE WITH WAT U SAID IN YOUR POEM AND AINT SHIT HAPPENING IF WE AINT TOGETHER UH? THEY R JUST GONNA HAVE TO LEARN THE HARD WAY.

GREAT WORK. 5/5