Just Trying to Live

by Rose Noble   Mar 26, 2008


I'm just trying to live
So someone help me.
I just need a little..
Just a bit of money.

I'm just trying to live
Please help me out
I need some food
But I'll try not to pout

I'm just tryng to live
And get through this
Maybe get a job..
I dont need bliss

I just need a home
Some place to live
And raise a family
Maybe have a kid.

I just need some help
So please, be nice
I'm homeless and poor
And sleep with the mice.

I just need a shove
To get me going
So even just a job
Might get me flowing..

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rose Noble

    Thank you very much! I actually got this poem idea from Pursuit of Happyness. Very touching moving.

    But thank you for the comment. =3

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    This is good...it's simple, kind of a surface meaning, but it makes you think about what you could do, you know kindness. Kinda like that movie....what's in called....Pass It On...it's not that, I don't know, but its about doing something for someone else, and them continuing on. It makes me think that if someday I'm an employer, that's one thing I can do to help someone out.
    Life is all about doing things for someone that they can never repay you for...excellent message, and excellent writing. The simplicity is amazing.