Comments : Just Trying to Live

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    This is good...it's simple, kind of a surface meaning, but it makes you think about what you could do, you know kindness. Kinda like that movie....what's in called....Pass It On...it's not that, I don't know, but its about doing something for someone else, and them continuing on. It makes me think that if someday I'm an employer, that's one thing I can do to help someone out.
    Life is all about doing things for someone that they can never repay you for...excellent message, and excellent writing. The simplicity is amazing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rose Noble

    Thank you very much! I actually got this poem idea from Pursuit of Happyness. Very touching moving.

    But thank you for the comment. =3