by Mr. Darcy Mar 26, 2008
category :
Special events /
other poems
'We're ready mum!' |
Quite the quick, rapid poem to read.. it flowed beautifully and imagery in this was great. A really neat poem about Easter.. in the middle it gets sad cause they cant find their eggs haha, but in the end it's quite the uplifting happy piece. :] |
by Bekka Smekka
A very happy poem!! i like it!!! it almost makes me feel like i'm with the kids searching for the eggs!! lol great |
:) This poem just made me smile, it was like a story with a happy ending. I loved the flow, nice work. Thank you for your comment on my poem. |
This poem was a delight to read. Conjured up images of children running round a large garden with small tree, climbing to find the eggs. It was a treasure. I will read more of your work with anticipation. THankyou for sharing. I have added you as a fave author Mr Darcy X |
by Tom Swart
I liked the poem when it ended at - why it had to snow. I think that part made the poem for me - short and to a point where I could relate. It snowed here in Jamestown New York as well over easter. NIce write!! |