Comments : Bright eyes wide

  • 16 years ago

    by MusoXDanielle

    Aww i really like this poem!!
    You have such tallent with writing!
    Good gift to have!!

    5-5!!

    Keep it up!

    Danielle
    x

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Aww. darn that snow! it never snows here. so i can't say i understand. lol. this is really adorable and made me smile. great job

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Very sweet and interesting. You've written it in such a manner that it becomes really interesting to read.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Wilburn

    A snowy Easter that came early this year. Your poem reminds me of my childrens experiences here in the Colorado Mountains. Wonderful descriptive verse. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    This was amazing!!
    It rhymed so well.

    Good JoB!! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    This really created a real picture, I love your writing its very descriptive. I could clearly imagine little kids running around, all excited. I can remember things that happened to me also when I was younger, this poem clearly reminded me of that. I'm sure others were reminded of their childhood as well. Good write.

  • 6 years ago

    by Khai Montegrande

    Sad but definitely a good Job on this masterpiece.
    :)