by ashley joy Mar 26, 2008
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Lost in thought |
by Deana
Your rhymes are really very good,I like the concept of this,we all feel this way sometimes I think. |
I love how this piece of work is written. To be able to connect everything together and to portray being trapt in ones mind is no easy task. I really liked it. Good work. |