by Kayla Mar 26, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Darkness crept slowly and surrounded her soul. |
by Baby Rainbow
Ohh, great opening line, very strong, well doen on this onei liek it keep it up xxxxxxx |
by Kayla
Amazing, beautiful, flawless, everything a good poem needs. The choice of words just captured me and left me breathless. I couldn't believe how great this poem was, definitely a masterpiece. A little short, but you truly did get your point across in this piece. As an ex-cutter, I can relate 100%. This is amazing, don't stop writing. I look forward to reading more from you, Kayla. Take care. 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 |