Oh my... such a tragic poem. I held my breath the entire time as things began to turn for the worse. I could picture the entire poem out in my head like a movie. Things like this happen all of the time, it's so horrible. No one should have to go through anything like that and I'm glad I was never one of them. Amazing choice of words with such a smooth flow. I would have to say this is the work of a true professional. Don't stop! 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

That was amazing. Great flow and very tragic.

Wow this is a good poem i like it alot i kinda can relate you should check out some of my poems

Thts an amzing poem, very sad. 5/5