Comments : Crimson Artworks

  • 16 years ago

    by Kayla

    Once again, an amazing poem. How long have you been writing, hun? Your poetry is so impressing, it seems like you've been writing for a long time. But anyways, as I've said before, I am an ex-cutter so I can definitely relate to this. It's horrible how some of us turn to self-harm, but what can you do? I thought you did an excellent job with this one as well. I would have to say my favorite stanza would have to be this one,

    "She tugs up her sleeve.
    Scars cover her arm.
    Picks a place to leave
    Temporary harm."

    I can just relate to it so well. You know your stuff, my dear. Great job. 5/5 <3 <3 <3

    ~Kayla~

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats really good, well done and the ending line artificial piece is just great. well done xx