You hurt me

by noha   Mar 26, 2008


You hurt me in a way i never thought
that you could .
You put thoughts to mind , i never thought
that you could.
You made my heart feel ways , i never thought
that it could.
You made me think of you in away , i never thought you would.
I had to open up my eyes to things , i never thought that i could.
You hurt me more than i ever thought
that you could.
You made me feel ways , i never thought
that i could.
you made me wish
what i never thought i could.
You hurt me more than many yet ,
i respect you as a person more than any.
I was loved by many but,
never hurt by you .
I thought that i could be hurt by many,
But i never thought that i could be hurt by you.
You hurt me in ways,
that just wont change .
The pain i feel one should never have to feel.
Yet i learned to maintain ,
the feelings that i should have to word you .
You hurt me but i bet you never thought that you could.

** you hurt me more than i ever thought, i don't know why?, i love you AMR,And the pain wont fade away,
So now I have to live with it every day.
i love you and i still , i hope that you can fix this one day.

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  • 16 years ago

    by LoveTear

    EXCELENT ! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Janalicious14

    It's a sad poem of love, I also felt that before..
    great poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by iloveyouandrew

    I love this poem, Its going in my favorites its a beautiful poem, and it like describes the way I feel...Great Job :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenn

    Great job. Maybe you could adjust the lines, where they begin and end. I'm not sure if it's just the site that changed the format though.
    I love this line,

    "I had to open up my eyes to things that i never thought that i could."

    (In my opinion, it may sound even better if you take out the second "that" in the line.)

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    Though this is a very sad topic to write about, I just didn't feel it. Maybe it was the fact that you kept repeating all the "coulds". After a while, it got TOO repetitve.
    All in all, not bad, but not my favorite.

    Take care,
    ~Lace

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