Comments : I Am Your Child

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I like how write about this, and you wrote it perfectly. I loved this part:

    "I am your child: the unborn infant within your stomach.
    Filled with innocence, purity, and hope.
    I long for the chance to be held
    In the loving arms of yours, Mommy."

    That is so cool! Every line was truely amazing, and I loved the very last line, that was a really cool ending. Good Job!