Cool work x

Wow, a really, really good piece. I loved the slight change in the first line of each stanza. Once again, it was very well worded. I didn't really like the last line of the second stanza, it seemed rather weak to me, sorry. My favorite stanza is between the first and third, but I can't choose one over the other, sorry again. Great piece though.

Brad

Wow I loved how different and interesting this was. The topic you choice had me hooked from beginning to end and I was eager to see how you would end this. The message was clearly written and your use of words was flawless here. Well done *5/5*

Amazing write here....so so true...