Thanks dad i love you too

by MERCY is never shown   Mar 26, 2008


You tell me I'm being a brat
you say it all comes with being a teen
i say its not my fault
your just being too mean
i ask what Ive done
to deserve such a fate
a slap of your hand
and a kick to the ribs
i lay on the ground
hiding a whelp and holding back tears
how could this girl of just fifteen
who feels as though she is three
stand up to a full grown man
what is this you ask of me
i have no use nothing i could do
no service i could bring
after what you've put me through
AND I'M EXPECTED TO FORGIVE YOU!!

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  • 14 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I do not think that it flowed very well. But it seemed more like one of those poems we write to get the anger out or something. The emotion through out was definetly magnificent. Just try working on your lines a little better to make sure they flow right of the tounge as you read them. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Ken

    Ok for this poem it was deep and good but I felt as tho it could have been alil or mayb even alot longer.

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow, capatils in last line really work. well done great job hun xx

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