I'm going to really honest. I love all your poem and I think you are an amazing writer but this isn't your best from what I have seen. For this reason I'm not going to vote for this, but you can see what you're trying to portray in this poem.
People will say I'm wrong and say this is really good and that but remember I'm only one opinion and don't be offended x

Good poem, It's very touching, from life experience many people could relate to this wonderful piece.

Good poem,

Keep writing!
[5.5]

Best wishes,

Sarah A

Ya this poem is awsome!
very relatable,
5/5