Friday will be the day it will be over

by XLOSTxxANDxxWANDERINGX   Mar 26, 2008


Pills oh pills,
Pills galore
Take them, swallow them
Lock the door

I will succeed
40 will pour
20 aint work
So I will do 20 more

Watch myself bleed
With a cut or 2
Maybe more
it doesn't matter how many i do

The pills will go down my stomach
They will F-k it up
F-k with me
Until I erupt

Convince myself
I am the only one to blame
I should be in trouble
I should be ashamed

F-k with my body
Make myself die
I should have been dead
Kill myself I shall not cry

No one will see or know
When I fade away
No one can worry anymore
Because Friday will be the day

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  • 16 years ago

    by Angel Tears

    This was a great poem, I really enjoyed reading it. It portrayed a lot of pain and anger within the words.. I could feel the emotions of the author pouring out from the piece. Very nicely done.

  • 16 years ago

    by damont

    Wonderful poem very sad thou.... hmmmmm.. keep writing. 5/5 umm if this poems is true why you wanna try and kill yourself?

  • 16 years ago

    by Krathia

    In my opinion, you need to work more on the last stanza; get rid of some syllables (just a couple on the 1st and 3rd line), since the entire poem was composed by short verses.

    Otherwise it was good; the short lines made it not only pleasing to the eye but it grips the reader from the very beginning and keeps her bound in your intense phrasing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Alvaro

    My skin, I will cut through

    that line is the only flaw to me, it didnt go with the flow, WHICH was AMAZING it looked flawless just that line needs some work, beautiful though 5/5 amazing it was deep with those small lines loved it

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