by XLOSTxxANDxxWANDERINGX Mar 26, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Pills oh pills, |
by Angel Tears
This was a great poem, I really enjoyed reading it. It portrayed a lot of pain and anger within the words.. I could feel the emotions of the author pouring out from the piece. Very nicely done. |
by damont
Wonderful poem very sad thou.... hmmmmm.. keep writing. 5/5 umm if this poems is true why you wanna try and kill yourself? |
by Krathia
In my opinion, you need to work more on the last stanza; get rid of some syllables (just a couple on the 1st and 3rd line), since the entire poem was composed by short verses. |
by Alvaro
My skin, I will cut through |