My skin, I will cut through

that line is the only flaw to me, it didnt go with the flow, WHICH was AMAZING it looked flawless just that line needs some work, beautiful though 5/5 amazing it was deep with those small lines loved it

In my opinion, you need to work more on the last stanza; get rid of some syllables (just a couple on the 1st and 3rd line), since the entire poem was composed by short verses.

Otherwise it was good; the short lines made it not only pleasing to the eye but it grips the reader from the very beginning and keeps her bound in your intense phrasing.

Wonderful poem very sad thou.... hmmmmm.. keep writing. 5/5 umm if this poems is true why you wanna try and kill yourself?

This was a great poem, I really enjoyed reading it. It portrayed a lot of pain and anger within the words.. I could feel the emotions of the author pouring out from the piece. Very nicely done.