I liked this though you went from she to I kind of throwing me off a little but other than
that I really liked this. There are alot of
people these days who hide and lie there
home life from those around them.Thinking
they will laugh make fun or something like
that. Life is hard and for those who hide and
lie from those who care is alot harder then
those other people who are getting Cs in
school.
5/5
Take care

-Kortney