Stardom.

by ASPHYXIATED   Mar 26, 2008


Look around you sunshine, Look what you've created,
A chaos ridden atmosphere is just an understatement.
Your need for perfection in a rock and roll life,
Will cost you your freedom, Addiction to the knife.

Keep your smile sweetie, You're going to need it,
Now flaunt for the camera, Insecurities so conceited.
Share your life story, How your childhood was so tough,
They don't know it rehearsed, Taken straight from a book.

It's time for a disorder babe, You can take your pick,
Depression or bulimia, Popping pills or getting sick?
But you'll have to follow through, And keep the tabloids on track.
'Cause once you enter stardom, Theres no going back.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    This was a creative write. i loved it. good detail and the whole thing was quite unique. i love the subject you chose to write about. it's different, and different is good. the flow was fanstastic also. simply a great read. i have no complaints. job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 16 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    A simply amazing poem. I can feel that emoiton that makes this poem great.

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Excuse me, KindlyUnspoken. Not Nyell.

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    I guess I missed the whole rhyming thing that Nyell is complaining about, but that's just me.
    I mean I've seen poems that one stanza rhymes and the next one doesn't and no one complained then. -=Shrugs=-
    Idk, I guess that's just me.

    I loved it. Overall, I think you described everything to the last camera snapshot. :] It was perfect, darling.
    Lovce you
    xxxx
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by minh

    Interestnig... good job

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