I loved it
:]
ive felt this way many of times
5/5
great poem

Very passionate poem and sad. i loved the whole poem because it holds strong feelings but i liked this part most
*We can face this journey together
Or we can conquer our demons alone,
Whichever path we decide to take
I hope I find somewhere where sadness is unknown*
well explained and written. you just show many deep feelings by these lines

this life is sure mysterious but if you both love+care+understand and trust each other then you can over come anything in your way

This piece expresses in a concise way the thoughts and emotion felt at the end of a serious relationship.

I begged you to end it, bring back the happy days
But they are long gone now, it's just too late.

I like this part the best.

Jodie, this one is awsome too. until lately, i never really knew what it felt like to lose a friendship or relationship. it just hurts so much. i do hope you do find the place where sadness is unknown!!

Diffrent is all i can say......

Nice made, I hope there will be a place that unknows sadness..

Keep it up

>3

xx flynel

Very moving and sad, with a hint
of faith. Very nice, absalutly love it, 5/5

-mandy :)

Each of your paragraphs are like quotes
each part cnnecting like a change. You
are a very talented writer and I love your
work. I FEEL GUILTY liking something that is
painful to you but its so well written it weirld
do you know what i mean?

Totally relatable. I loved how well written it is. 5/5