When...

by ile   Mar 26, 2008


When I look into your eyes
I see the stars

When you hold me in your arms
I feel so safe

When I feel the beating of your heart
I'm so alive

When our lips touch
I feel in heaven

When I'm with you
I never want to leave

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  • 16 years ago

    by maEve may

    ..short yet lovely...so nice...:)

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Very cute! I think you could put a bit more emotion into it, I just wasn't feeling it. I think you should also be more descriptive and put more feeling in it, just to improve it.
    Take care!

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