Amazing poem. Very discriptive and meaningful. 5/5

dont give up hope.

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Aw. hun, this is so sad....i wish more people would read it, since it's amazing...

Happy eyes,
are all just lies.

^ i understand that. what's funny...people dn't think it's possible to lie with one's eyes. ahaha.

great job,dear

I really like this 5/5

I would still stay and take pain and stay with wit the person

You would see the tears swell in their eyes,
and marks on arms covered by lies.
Could you handle your life wile taking on other's pain?
could you ignore it all or would you go insane?
-so amazing, you have talent