To Love or To Hate

by ashley joy   Mar 26, 2008


The only truth in a sea full of lies
But where is this truth now?
Buried with the rest of them
I hate you
Torn by what you once were and who you are now
You were so beautiful then
But what are you now?
I Love you
Once you were able to stand on your own
Now you can't stand without your crutch
I wish you couldn't stand at all
I Hate you
Where are you?
I can't seem to find you
You think you need what brings you pain
So pathetic
I Love you
You can't bring yourself to let go
Well now I'm letting you go
Maybe you will never really see until there is nothing left to see
I Hate you
Do I hate you?
Do I?
Can I?
After all this time can I let you go?
Do I love you?
Do I?
Can I?
After all this time can I keep you here?
I can't make up my mind
I Hate Loving you

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  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    Hey... This poem hit me deep, I felt exactly this when my ex walked off with another guy, wow... great job here!

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Uhmm , it is good to vent yout i can see how much confusing this can be and the poem react good to it , and express it good ,

    but structure wise, you should have , done a lot more better if you split the poem into stanzas and work more on teh rhym
    and more
    the lengh of the lines is important too ,
    i hope you take this advice

  • 16 years ago

    by Deana

    This was very good,Did you mean to say"you can't bring yourself to let....go? I loved the ending it was excellent.

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