This was very good,Did you mean to say"you can't bring yourself to let....go? I loved the ending it was excellent.

Uhmm , it is good to vent yout i can see how much confusing this can be and the poem react good to it , and express it good ,

but structure wise, you should have , done a lot more better if you split the poem into stanzas and work more on teh rhym
and more
the lengh of the lines is important too ,
i hope you take this advice

Hey... This poem hit me deep, I felt exactly this when my ex walked off with another guy, wow... great job here!

5/5