The journey of life

by Poseur   Mar 27, 2008


This isnt exactly a poem, but oh well

--everybody says that life is a journey, but i dont think so. in a journey you actually end up going somewhere. i look at life more like a roller coaster; you start out slow, pick up speed, you go over all the bumps, the twists, and the turns, then you slow down, and you stop. and guess what? you end up exactly where you started. cause at the end of your life, it doesnt matter what you have made of yourself or what everybody thinks of you cause your going out the same way you came in--with nothing.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Love vs Fate

    I wanted to tell you that you did a good job on this poem/story. you gave me a picture that i had a little trouble seeing at first but in the end i was able to clear it up.
    the words you chose were still good so don't get me wrong. i'm nowhere close to being as good as jennifer as far as correcting a poem.

    but i will give you a 5/5 cuz it reminded me of what you were trying to tell us. life is hard and it does have many twists and turns. but overall i loved it. great job. keep it up ^_^

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