Excellently written poem. You created astonishing, so vivid imagery in every stanza. I like the choice of words in the whole poem a lot, you have great vocab. The one thing that is the most impressive about this piece is the way that superb atmosphere and great imagery mixed to highlight such powerful emotions. This is very heartfelt write, filled with truly fantastically expressed feelings.
The only thing I don't like is that you used the word 'fade" in the fourth stanza and than again in the last one. Maybe it can be replaced with other word in the ending lines.
Overall, greatly gone.
My favorite lines are:

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Lost in a state of confusion,
Clouds following his lonesome soul,
Soaked by his own tears; Recognition sparks,
He sees the faces of his anguish in these crystals.-

Keep writing!

Tragic yet beautiful. you're a very talented writer.

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