Broken record

by StandStill   Mar 27, 2008


Broken record
sing your song
sing it, sing it
all night long

mock me, dear
throughout the day
broken record,
continue to play

make me hate me
i already do
broken record,
how bout you?

play the same thing
sing that song
break me neatly
don't do this wrong

mock me, record
i already do
break me, record
i wanna be like you

this is...odd

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  • 16 years ago

    by Live WeLL

    This was a really interesting poem but i liked it! I love the way the words just kept on going and going and it was so easy to read...

    very very unique poem which makes it that much better. I like your style! Keep it up! =) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Sara Sutton

    Hehe i like it! =]
    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by writeXlovexonxherXarms

    I love this poem:]
    it was AMAZING<3
    good jobbbbbb
    love it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Faithless Watermelon

    That's a truly amazing poem. short as the lines are, they hold such deep meaning. i really hope you never stop writing because just from this i can tell that you have a rare talent. and it's not odd, it just has its own place in the world, just like everything else does

  • 16 years ago

    by Ares

    Extremely good!

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