Gabby! Oh my dear.. all I can really say right now is just WOW. It is odd, yes, but omg... that doesn't make it any less amazing! I loved it, the flow was just so perfect and you had me locked in the entire time I was reading. I loved the choice of words you used, I couldn't have made it any better myself. The work of a true professional. I can't even say I had any favorite stanzas.. the entire thing was just excellent. I loved it, you are an amazing writer. Don't stop, doll! Love you. 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3

~Kayla~

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WoW!! I like the fact you repeated the words

Mock me, record

In the second and fourth stanza!! It made the poem sound really good.

mock me, record
i already do
break me, record
i wanna be like you

This stanza, I loved soo much. You write so good, you definitely have a talent.

^_^ 5/5

Short, flowing, kinda depressing, I like it! ;)

Absolutely amazing??? YES YES YES

"mock me, record
i already do
break me, record
i wanna be like you"

^ oh wow. u rly out did urself here. 5/5!!!

OMG! Wonderful! I love it!! I love the rhythm. Absolutely WONDERFUL! 5/5!!! Lots of emotion in this!! :) LOVE IT!

--**SKye~

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Odd..yes...but it is you.....I liked it....not your best but it works......

I love this, definatly one of my favirote reads. I could find no faults with this at all. In my eyes it was a perfect poem and i could never give it enough praise.

I love this babe ur soo sweet

I loved it
5/5
:]
great poem

Really good! It flows so well and is so random! I love it!

Extremely good!

That's a truly amazing poem. short as the lines are, they hold such deep meaning. i really hope you never stop writing because just from this i can tell that you have a rare talent. and it's not odd, it just has its own place in the world, just like everything else does

I love this poem:]
it was AMAZING<3
good jobbbbbb
love it.

Hehe i like it! =]
<3

This was a really interesting poem but i liked it! I love the way the words just kept on going and going and it was so easy to read...

very very unique poem which makes it that much better. I like your style! Keep it up! =) 5/5