This is nice, i like the rhyme and how it flows, very simple yet has a very nice lesson behind it, eg " you think you are all fame, you think its all about looks ",.. I guess many can relate to this at some time in life.. Keep it up

This is nice, i like the rhyme and how it flows, very simple yet has a very nice lesson behind it, eg " you think you are all fame, you think its all about looks ",.. I guess many can relate to this at some time in life.. Keep it up

Thanks it took a little while to write i really related to it