A beautiful poem you've got here, m'dear. It's something I can say that I've been able to relate to at one point.

"Sticky tears on my cheeks,"
- personally, i don't like the usage of 'sticky'. it just sounds weird when i read it out loud. -shrugs- maybe it's just me. :P [i personally would have used the word 'crystal' - i think it sounds so beautiful when describing tears. :P]

The flow was smooth, the emotions were sad and heartbreaking, and your word usage was wisely chosen. :] Lovely job. Overall: 5.5

- Steph. xx