Your picture upon my canvas

by Elapsed   Mar 27, 2008


Paint a picture upon this canvas
Sign your name behind its surface

Awaken the sensors with colourful sequence
Capture breaths and fasten them to suspense

Consume thoughts with vibrant mystery
Spray the mind with your abstract graffiti

Layers slowly forming to shape a future
As you apply texture to the scenery with your finger

Envision the next stroke of your brush with silence
As you let me linger in your view from a distance

Splash the colours of the rainbow careless
Letting it seep through this grainy surface

If you will... Da Vinci me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sharon

    You are so witty i love it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Deana

    I agree with Cindy this is very unique,painting is my other hobby so I especially loved it,an excellent use of comparisons.

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Excellent usage of words and imagination. Loved the theme and even a thought of blending poetry with painting is making me excited in all the senses... :)
    great poem dear

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    ~Bravo!~ My favorite of yours.....love it! What beautiful imagery and metaphors!...and the ending lines....ahhhh perfection....

  • 16 years ago

    by desiring love

    I loved it! anytime!

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