Comments : Your picture upon my canvas

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Sam
    This is so unique. I love it.

    Consume thoughts with vibrant mystery
    Spray the mind with you're abstract graffiti

    This is really awesome. These 2 lines are so cool.

    Layers slowly forming to shape a future
    As you apply texture to the scenery with you're finger

    These lines give the feelings of passion.

    Envision the next stroke of your brush with silence
    As you let me linger in you're view form a distance

    I love the way I feel when I read these lines like you are standing back and admiring the work.

    Splash the colours of the rainbow careless
    Letting it seep through its grainy surface

    If you will... Da Vinci me

    Brilliant Sam!
    ~Clapping~
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Sammy,

    What a unique poem you have penned. It is very creative and so full of life. Your mojo has returned to you, hahaha!

    Love Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Great!!!!!
    Really very artistic style. A different but creative write.
    Keep up the good work.

    God bless u

  • 16 years ago

    by Sourav

    Very nice. Very interesting. Very good!

  • 16 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Sam,
    This was such a beautiful, breathtaking masterpiece. Truly my favorite of yours. A remarkable job on this you have done and created a masterpiece of your own.
    I love the picture it painted in my minds eye. Wonderful imagery and word usage. Very impressed and never doubted a beautiful unique piece would come from you. You are so full of talent and posess the ability to captivate your readers. I usually do not care for love poems but this one got my attention. Wonderful write friend.

  • 16 years ago

    by desiring love

    I loved it! anytime!

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    ~Bravo!~ My favorite of yours.....love it! What beautiful imagery and metaphors!...and the ending lines....ahhhh perfection....

  • 16 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Excellent usage of words and imagination. Loved the theme and even a thought of blending poetry with painting is making me excited in all the senses... :)
    great poem dear

    all the best and take care

  • 16 years ago

    by Deana

    I agree with Cindy this is very unique,painting is my other hobby so I especially loved it,an excellent use of comparisons.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sharon

    You are so witty i love it!