Absolutley beautiful!i loved the way you laced together these words to form such a heart filled poem that i think everyone can relate too at one point...on my favorites 5/5

~Jo Anna EL

Awwe, i love this poem. It's very well written, loved it.

Thank you for the comment on my poem

-vanessa

NICE WORK,i love it and i know how you feel as me too lose someone i love so true,and every word you write show me how you love and its so deep and hurt .
well done

I loved your opening stanza because it created such flawless imagery and lured me in to read more. I do think your flow was nice but there were moments where you forced some rhyming that threw the flow off a bit. I also think you used the word "left" too many times in your piece which made it bland to read. Replace those words with others ones that are not so simple so that you can capture your reader. I hope I wasn't too mean .. I really did enjoy your piece which is why I am giving it a *5/5*