I like the message of this poem. You've chosen great topic to write about. I like your choice of words from the beginning to the end. Short yet very effective write.

Wow, I really liked it this, most people don't write poetry like this, and it's I really enjoyed how unique it was. I also really loved the way this poem flowed, and it's message.
5/5
~gabriella

I loved it =)

I thought it was neat. To me though it could have been a little bit more outside of the box. But it was still good. I haven't read a poem like this in a long time. I thought it was cool you put a little note at the end. It helps the reader understand
nice job
5/5