Darkness

by xL0st1slf   Mar 27, 2008


I'm swimming all alone in a pool of darkness
and I feel like darkness is slowly pulling me under
I yell for help but no one is there to hear it
I begin to see the water at eye level
and I kick and flail
fighting to stay above the darkness
But the darkness won't let go of its hold on me
and I slowly begin to give in
to the feeling that lies below the water line
the waters starts to fill my lungs
the lungs that once held so much life
yet now they allow the murky water to replace that
I know that this path doesn't lead to happiness
But why doesn't someone grab my hand
pull me from darkness's grasp?
because no one knows I stand at the boundary
the boundary between light and dark
so I give in to the thing that holds me
All of the strength and all of the courage
that I once held in my heart
can't save me from the water
So I slowly slip below the world of conscientiousness
undetected by the occupants of that world
I don't want to fight anymore
I've given into darkness

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  • 13 years ago

    by nicolette

    Thanks please if you really like it vote for it and look at some others, also if you know other people on the site could u possibly tell or ask them to look at more of my poems. In return I'll vote for and/or read yours

  • 13 years ago

    by nicolette

    Thanks please if you really like it vote for it and look at some others, also if you know other people on the site could u possibly tell or ask them to look at more of my poems. In return I'll vote for and/or read yours

  • 16 years ago

    by ForbiddenSnowflake

    Wow that was a really good poem. I like the use of darkness as water so you can understand how it would feel like.

    -So I slowly slip below the world of conscientiousness
    undetected by the occupants of that world
    I don't want to fight anymore
    I've given into darkness-

    I really like this ending giving into darkness. I can defintely relate to this writing. Good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by nicolette

    That poem i loved it really speaks to me i hope u reveiw my poems byeeeeeeeee

    the best poem i ever heard.

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