That poem i loved it really speaks to me i hope u reveiw my poems byeeeeeeeee

the best poem i ever heard.

Wow that was a really good poem. I like the use of darkness as water so you can understand how it would feel like.

-So I slowly slip below the world of conscientiousness
undetected by the occupants of that world
I don't want to fight anymore
I've given into darkness-

I really like this ending giving into darkness. I can defintely relate to this writing. Good work!

Thanks please if you really like it vote for it and look at some others, also if you know other people on the site could u possibly tell or ask them to look at more of my poems. In return I'll vote for and/or read yours

Thanks please if you really like it vote for it and look at some others, also if you know other people on the site could u possibly tell or ask them to look at more of my poems. In return I'll vote for and/or read yours