All Alone

by Emilia   May 23, 2004


I were standing here and I thought of you.
I were standing there forever just thinking of you.
But I knew, it didn't make a difference cause you wouldn't never come back, come back to me..

I'm so alone without you I'm nothing without you.
You were my better half...my whole life.
Now I'm alone so alone my bed are so cold without you by my side.

The only thing that's warm are my tears that are running down my cheek and there's nothing I can do about it.

I tried to told you how much I love you. But you didn't listen. I tried to say how much I needed you but you didn't care. You will never care about me.

The only thing you will care about is you new girlfriend.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Brigitte

    Very nice poem but it was a little hard to read due to the grammer of it :) Other than that nice job!

  • 19 years ago

    by shannon

    aww.. i really liked your poem..so goodd! 5/5

    take care
    much love
    shannon

  • 20 years ago

    by Kaitlin Elizabeth

    This is a great poem! Keep up the awesome work!

  • 20 years ago

    by Emma!!!

    w+ow th+i+s poem is ood well done

    +Emma

  • 20 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    This content of this poem is really great... but you really need to fix some grammatical problems. If you type your poems in Microsoft Word 98 or more recent, the spell checker will find these and help you fix them:

    I were standing here
    I were standing there
    *both these should say "I was"

    cause you would´t never
    *should say "wouldn't ever"

    my bed are so cold
    *should say "my bed is so cold"

    I tried to told you
    *should say "to tell you"

    The only thing you will care about are
    *should say "care about is"

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