This content of this poem is really great... but you really need to fix some grammatical problems. If you type your poems in Microsoft Word 98 or more recent, the spell checker will find these and help you fix them:

I were standing here
I were standing there
*both these should say "I was"

cause you would´t never
*should say "wouldn't ever"

my bed are so cold
*should say "my bed is so cold"

I tried to told you
*should say "to tell you"

The only thing you will care about are
*should say "care about is"

w+ow th+i+s poem is ood well done

+Emma

This is a great poem! Keep up the awesome work!

aww.. i really liked your poem..so goodd! 5/5

take care
much love
shannon

Very nice poem but it was a little hard to read due to the grammer of it :) Other than that nice job!