This is how i write

by deadly sun   Mar 27, 2008


My fingers meet the keys
like a lovers gentle touch
i dance and play around with them
I want to write so much

Words run through my mind
Like the cars flying through the street
As soon as they hit paper
I feel a sudden relief

But that is not enough
More words must come down
I mutter each sentence to myself
Searching for the right sound

Every time I find one
I mutter it once again
After the second muttering
Most sentences don't sound the same

So still I keep on searching
Looking for that hard to find word
My mind is going so fast now
My vision begins to blur

Finally I slow
As I bring the poem to an end
Another written disaster
But I have created a new friend

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  • 16 years ago

    by HvN

    This poem describes exactly how I feel!! Great job, keep writing, please! you're an amazing poet.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Wow lol it's been a while since iv'e enjoyed a poem iv'e just read on here, excellent job
    =]
    It was well written and it has a great flow
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hear You Me

    Its nice to read a poem about what goes on behind the actual making of it. very well written

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    You know what i hate about this poem? it's so darn true!! lol. no, i really do adore this poem.

    Words run through my mind
    Like the cars flying though the street
    As soon as they hit paper
    I feel a sudden relief

    But that is not enough
    More words must come down
    I mutter each sentence to myself
    Searching for the right sound

    ^ lol. that drives me nuts. it all pours out so fast and then stops and doesn't sound right. rather bothersome.

    great job in capturing what it is to write. keep it up. ^.^

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