You know what i hate about this poem? it's so darn true!! lol. no, i really do adore this poem.

Words run through my mind
Like the cars flying though the street
As soon as they hit paper
I feel a sudden relief

But that is not enough
More words must come down
I mutter each sentence to myself
Searching for the right sound

^ lol. that drives me nuts. it all pours out so fast and then stops and doesn't sound right. rather bothersome.

great job in capturing what it is to write. keep it up. ^.^

Its nice to read a poem about what goes on behind the actual making of it. very well written

Wow lol it's been a while since iv'e enjoyed a poem iv'e just read on here, excellent job
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It was well written and it has a great flow
5/5

This poem describes exactly how I feel!! Great job, keep writing, please! you're an amazing poet.

5/5