You have a special gift to be able to still see through a childs eyes. I loved this poem. I could feel the adoration spill out as I read each line. The poem picked up momentum with each passing stanza. My favs were the last two. In these you get right into her mind. Great stuff.
Into your land of dreams you go
Each one a brand new star
Teddy bears and dancing clowns
All driving in their cars

With slides and swings and roundabouts
To a land far away you sail
On clouds of soft white cotton wool
Don't you fall off! Hang on to the rail

Into your land of dreams you go
Each one a brand new star
Teddy bears and dancing clowns
All driving in their cars

With slides and swings and roundabouts
To a land far away you sail
On clouds of soft white cotton wool
Don't you fall off! Hang on to the rail

^^And the last line. The metaphor for childhood, genius!!! 5/5

Michael

Thankyou for your comments they do mean so much to me

This is so child cute.adorable:)

This is so child cute.adorable:)