Woman Torn Apart

by Alisha   Mar 27, 2008


You strike me hard
And I get torn apart
I throw the ring at your face
And take back my heart
Cruel beating and painful memories
I thought you loved me
I thought you cared.
But you lift your hand
And all I can do is stand there and stare
You take one swing and I go down.
How can you say you love me and then hit me down?
Down on the floor covered in tears
I start thinking about the past two years
You challenged my knowledge and ended my career
You took me from my family, they were so dear.
Why must I take this from you?
You're a man with no heart
And I'm a woman who is torn apart

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  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Good work, your emotions were well expressed here. The flow was a bit off in some places but otherwise good work. Keep writing, always and forever....

  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    Wooo this is good. i like it but the beating . i likeit thatz what i got to say