So sad. A few of the words were used too much.. like belive in the first paragraph (stanza). Also the flow was a bit off. I really hope you didn't have to go through that.

Hey, i think this poem is great, so much emotion and so sad, it can only come from experience. relly unique. great poem 5/5. im really sorry this is true, it seems so hard to believe, that someone can go through this much. but i guess everything is possible in this cold world. anyway take care x

Thank you. it is hard. and i am sorry for your lose. trust me it is something that i wouldnt wish on my worst enemy. no matter how far along it is tough. all i thought about was what did i do wrong. what did i do for God to take my child. i still do not know those anwsers but with time peace has come. it is easier now and i find that i cant hide what i went threw because i never know when what i went threw can help someone else. if you wrote something about your miscarriage i would love to read it.