They have you too

by clarity   Mar 27, 2008


A short Little poem. It just came to mind...

Hectic chaos
Dying breed
Pouring out, souls to lead
From you to me,
Me to you
Don't stall now
They have you too.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie

    Oh wow! I really like this! It is so powerful in its own little way! The wording is excellent! You should really try to consider making a part 2 that is a longer version as I feel that it would be excellent!!!

    It is almost like a dark rhyme damning humanity! So simple in structure and yet so complex in body! Brilliant! I truly enjoyed it!

    Also, if you get a chance, please have a look over my poetry and let me know what you think!

    Natalie M. Sarantos