This poem is interesting. Not the best Ive read but certainly unique. One line in particular stood out for me amongst all others because I felt in that line, all the pain in the poem.

"alone in a place i call home"

I believe that with this line you are summarising the lives of so many people! Broken homes are common these days and broken people even more so. I believe u capture that in this line brilliantly!

Keep it up!

Also, if you get some time, please have a read over my poetry and let me know what you think!

Natalie M. Sarantos