Its beautiful poem like its art, i can feel all of this come through,nice flow and perfect choice of words, but i realy love the fact as i live it too ,its realy deserve t be one of my favorite well done 5/5

Somehow this was cute and I think its all it could be.

This was really good!..it had alot of emotion.

my favorite line was
"I'm here dying for another chance to make this right"

we all wish we can go back and change sumthing we regret!!!......i love it!..great job.....5/5
***aLy***

It was interesting to me, i had a calm image, but still strong.
good job

Papa that was good!! =)

5/5 i loved it.
it had a great flow :) and expressed a lot of emotion, great work