by Megan Mar 27, 2008
category :
Fun, humor /
for kids
There is a bus kids love so well, |
I disagree with "Bradley Peter" i LOVE the |
by kate
I thought this was very silly. hehe nice. |
It had its good and its bad bits. I didn't like the 'skiddlydiddlydoo' bit, but I did like the line 'but remember, don't tell anyone, they might think you're a loon!'. I didn't like the last line, it seemed way too weak for me, and i think a poem should always end strong. |